NinjaWeedle64's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tim's Fun Game]

Pros:
- Voice acting is a nice touch even if it is a bit mediocre
Cons:
-The audio mixing has the same problem as the Sonic Adventure 2 Battle cutscenes- The music is so loud I can't hear the voices! Get closer to your microphone, and try to memorize your lines a little more so there aren't awkward pauses.
- A lot of the fails also seem to be reused from the henry stickmin games- It's alright to be inspired, but make the fails original so I have a reason to play the game.
- the plot doesn't make much sense either- it seems like a choppy retelling of infiltrating the Airship.
- Icons stay on screen, several events play out at once sometimes... You shouldn't need to tell people to ignore this because this can and should be fixed. The game suffers immensely because of this issue.

EdalgmGaming responds:

RyanOC Will Make A Update Soon

Also I Don't Have A Micophone
Also I Never Played Sonic Adventure 2 Battle
Also In The Update I Will Make The Music Quieter
Also THEN WHAT DO MY OTHER GAMES SUFFER FROM?!

[Coin Clicker - Scratch Version]

Pros:
- I like seeing the coins pile up over time.
- Clicking the coin is satisfying which is the most important aspect.
Cons:
- The intro screen takes a little too long for my liking, so cut the length in half at the very least.
- The music is somewhat grating. Try going with something more ambient.
- The shop is somewhat confusing in its description and isn't as clean looking as the rest of the game.

TheColourUnknown responds:

I hope to make an updated version soon. The release date is unknown, but it'll be better than the original.

[A Rubbery Story 2]

A definite improvement over the original in animation and gameplay. However, the engrish is still there, and the plot makes less sense than the original (Why did the park catch fire out of the blue?)

2.5/5 Getting better, but still needs more work on all fronts. Don't be afraid to spend more than a week on a game.

Cydro responds:

Hi! thank you very much for the review and the fire...idk

[A Rubbery Story]

There's a fair amount of engrish(THANKS FOR PLAY!), which makes the game a little confusing Overall, I can see that you cared about the game, but didn't put enough time into it. The lack of branching choice paths is a major blow to the game's replayability.

Cydro responds:

i fixed the engrish from "thanks for play!", if have another engrish, please let me know